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Oct 10, 2015

55 Fiction - A Jolly soul

This post has been published by me as a part of Blog-a-Ton 56; the fifty-sixth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write.


During her last rites, everyone remembered her as a jolly soul.
Even at the age of 40, she was skittish like a teenager.
God knows, she had a contagious smile, spreading the joy with all.
When they read her diary later, they got to know the secret of her smile.
It was her broken life.

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24 comments:

  1. That flinching twist at the end... Ouch that hurt. All the best for BAT

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  2. broken secret ... credits to modern life style(read individualism) and short term relationships

    ATB for blogaton

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  3. outward smiles aren't always the true ones, I guess. ouch.

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    1. Thank You Vinay. Yes, sometimes it is like that.

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  4. Poor thing! Behind her innocent face there was so much agony.

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    1. Thank you for visiting my blog. :)
      People deal with their life problems in different ways.

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  5. That's very true. A person who smiles a lot has hidden tears :) All the best for BAT! Keep writing!

    Poetically yours,
    Someone is Special

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  6. What a thought.... what a thought!!!

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  7. I like the way you gave the perfect way people should be even though if we have problems. Just smile and face the problems is the Sparking point for success. Great writing.

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    1. Thank You Vajra.
      Problems are the certainty of life that cannot be avoided. But we all can try to deal with it in the best possible way. We all gradually learn through our ways, don't we?

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  8. There are few people who can be happy, without overshadowing others with the sadness in their life.. Most of us only crib.. Very nice

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    1. Thank you Megha for visiting my blog. I am glad you liked the post :)

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  9. Did not expect the end, but such people are truly amazing. They overcome their sorrows, and only bring joy to others. I wish there were more of them. I wish someday I am able to do this, at-least in some small way.

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    1. Thank You Shantala. :)
      Indeed, such people are truly amazing and courageous at the same time.

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  10. there are few people like her which give happiness when they are sorrowful

    My BAT56 entry A Secret Revealed

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  11. They do say LAUGHTER and SMILE is what people remember always

    Bikram's

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  12. Behind a smile lies a thousand secrets! Well written.
    Do drop by my blog and read my 55 fiction post for BAT56

    ATB for BAT56!

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